Readings.

When I was enrolling to study (writing and editing) years ago, one of the teachers told me a prerequisite of the course was monthly readings, and that there was an obligation that students read at least twice yearly.

Readings!  What the hell …?  Not an attractive proposition for somebody as naturally insular as myself.  The thought terrified me. I also didn’t really understand the relevance behind needing to do it.

Come the first readings I attended, I began understanding some of the merit behind the idea.  I watched the audience.  Studied how they engaged with the reader.  Gauged what worked with them and what didn’t.  Just basically examined the relationship between reader and audience to attempt to determine how and when it functioned well, and how and when it didn’t.

Usually, students were meant to read writing from various assignments they might’ve just completed.  This might’ve been something as ambitious as a novel or short story, or as simple as a sense of character or place piece.

When it came my time to read, I decided none of those would do.  Who wanted to hear about my office?  And my fiction didn’t have self-contained scenes I felt comfortable reading, or which I thought might connect.  I needed to write something specifically for the audience – or at least something that would immerse them and make them attentive to me for the time that I read.

That’s when I truly began to comprehend the importance of readings.  Writing is only a small part of the writing game.  Putting words on the page and revising the hell out of it is a great place to start, but you need to consider how your work will fare with its intended audiences.  Giving it to friends/colleagues for feedback is one thing.  Seeing how it succeeds or fails when every set of eyes is devoted to you is another matter altogether.

Does that idea work?  Could that phrase be better?  Did that joke you thought a riot get the laughs you thought it would?  Did the audience await with baited breath during the tense passages?  When you’re writing, you can only hope you’re positively answering these questions – at least in your own mind.  Readings give you concrete proof, particularly with the people who matter most: your audience (and people you hope may one day buy your book).  You’ll see what works, what doesn’t, what’s fine, and what needs improvement.

Readings are a pivotal facet of development in any writer’s writing life.  On the pragmatic side of things, if writing is something you’re pursuing, then readings are something you’ll probably have to do as a means of marketing yourself, whether you’re a best-selling author or not.

We had our first readings last night and had a great turnout, with some fantastic readings and even a couple of songs.  Our next reading is on the 26th June, 7.30–9.00pm.  Come down, try your stuff out, or listen to others, and see how things work.  Whatever the case, it’s great fun.

LZ.

Launch.

Whilst Busybird has been around for over fifteen years, for the bulk of that time we were a business focused on design and photography. Our evolution into publishing has been recent – since late 2008, when we decided to begin our own fiction anthology, which everybody would know as [untitled].

Since then, we’ve produced five issues of [untitled], two issues of page seventeen, as well as the nonfiction anthology Journey: Experiences with Breast Cancer (a portion of proceeds going to BreaCan and WHOW) and the children’s book Who’s a Cheeky Monkey? (with all proceeds going to Destiny Rescue).

We’re now working on a sixth issue of [untitled], a companion book to Journey about prostate cancer (for which we’re still trying to find a perfect title – please email us if you have a idea), and have a host of other great projects in the pipeline.

We’ve also helped a number of authors self-publish their own books, providing services ranging from editing to layout to design. If there’s one thing we love, it’s stories, and helping people get out their own stories.

The next step in our evolution is the opening of our studio. We moved in several weeks ago, and have been working hard on making it home. Here you’ll find the Busybird team, as well as the books we’ve worked on. Feel free to drop in to chat about our projects or the services we can provide. We’re also going to be hosting a whole assortment of great workshops.

Otherwise, please join us for the Grand Opening of our studio this Thursday, 16th May, from 7.00pm. We also have on display the exhibition, In the Suburbs of the Heart, by linvanhek, which will be launched by poet/musician Joe Dolce. The exhibition will run from 16th May–6th June.

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Details:
Busybird Studio:
2/118 Para Road
Montmorency 3094
(Melway reference 21 B5)

For catering purposes, please RVSP Blaise by email us or call 0416 157 281.

And the winner is …

Oh boy, there’s so much happening here at Busybird HQ at the moment and May is going to be the biggest month as we open our doors to the public today at our studio gallery. Our own Les Zig is now officially our Publications Manager and he’ll be keeping you all up to date with what is happening.

BUT, for some of you reading this post, you may not care so much about any of that because you’re waiting to hear about our [untitled] short story competition. So, here are the results. We’d like to congratulate these people:

First ($500): ‘The Regatta’, Luke Thomas

Second ($250): ‘The Human Child’, Adrienne Tam

Third ($125): ‘She’s All Broken’, Peter R Hill

Commended: ‘Rollerbaby Queen’, Venetia Di Pierro
Commended: ‘Niall’s Edge’, Suzannah Marshall Macbeth

These stories will be published in issue 6 of [untitled] which is due out in June. Prizes for the competition will be presented at the launch, date to be advised.

I’d like to thank our editing committee (Les Zigomanis, Daniel Kovacevic, Jodie Garth, Helen Krionas, Danielle Gori, and Beau Hillier) for their dedication to reading all the stories entered into our competition.

The Short List

After much deliberation, we’ve narrowed down the stories to this shortlist for the [untitled] short story competition for 2013. Winner will be announced on 1 May.

Congratulations to these people:

‘Hope Corporation’, Tim Napper
‘Niall’s Edge’, Suzannah Marshall Macbeth
‘Rollerbaby Queen’, Venetia DiPierro
‘She’s All Broken’, Peter R Hill
‘Slipway’, Kate Elkington
‘Start at the Beginning’, Grant Wales
‘The Human Child’, Adrienne Tam
‘The Regatta’, Luke Thomas

The Right Tools

How many of you out there have a favourite pen to write with? Any type of art form (writing, painting, photography) has tools available to create the art. And some of us get a little OCD about our tools. I like a particular pen with a particular type of lined paper. The lines can’t be too bold and the paper needs to be smooth. I’ll search through shops for the perfect notebook and I have a good collection of them scattered around the house.

Same goes with a camera. The body of the camera needs to have a certain weight and feel in my hands. Despite the iPhone having a very good camera, I can’t seem to manage very good photos with it and I think it’s because, to me, it doesn’t have that camera feel. And yet, Kev can produce top quality shots every time. In fact, you’d be amazed that they’ve been taken on an iPhone.

So what’s my point, you may ask?

Surround yourself with the best tools to suit the way you work. Be indulgent. Don’t hold back when you create the best conditions to help you produce the best work ever. If this means searching the country for the perfect notebook or hanging onto that old camera for sentimental reasons or if you like to burn essential oils while you work. Do it.

Creating art is as important as having the finished product. This creation is a journey in itself. And if your tools aren’t doing it for you, then get cracking and experiment with them. Go to workshops, join a writing group, go on an expedition. Take an art class, ask questions, explore.

The world is waiting …

Blaise

Stretch yourself

As an artist of any kind, you should stretch yourself often to improve your skills. By doing this you learn new techniques and sometimes come up with great solutions to something that you’re already working on.

But how can you do this?

Trying out different writing techniques is well worth trying. This was brought back to me this week after teaching year 8 students flash fiction at Warrandyte High. To try to make it a little more interesting, I decided to make the students write in the Steampunk genre. For some this was well out of their comfort zone while others dived right in. This was quite difficult because the word limit was 100 words.

By giving yourself a challenge (this works equally in photography, art or music) you are looking at your craft from a different angle. It also really puts you into a creative space.

So, if you write prose, why not try your hand at some poetry. Or if you are a non-fiction writer, try to write a fantasy. Any time you play with words you are adding to your creative well and you may surprise yourself by coming up with an idea that you can use in your normal arena.

Go and listen to some poetry or music, attend a workshop or visit a gallery. These are all great ways to inform your craft.

Blaise

Life Happens No Matter What

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You might wonder why you’re looking at a goat … Meet Ernest. There’s only one reason why Ernest is in this post, and that’s because the picture makes me smile. We’ve been a bit sad here at Busybird over the past few weeks. We’ve had to farewell two special ladies who had their lives cut much too short.

Tracy was a contributing author to our [untitled] anthology, as well as  partner to Mal who is one of our early team members. We are saddened by this loss because Tracy leaves so much behind and many more pages to write.

And then there was Christine (sister-in-law to our chief editor) who was a HUGE supporter of everything we did and one of the two people who inspired us to publish Journey: Experiences with Breast Cancer. Both these ladies will be greatly missed.

So why the gloomy post?

It’s times like these that allow us to reflect on our own lives, how we live with others, what we are doing with the short time we have on earth in this life. It’s also a chance to look at how grief and reflection can shape our own selves and find some way to make sense of things. This is where writing, art, music can help to heal our soul.

As my sister-in-law says, ‘Savagely make it count.’

Blaise

Why submitting your work is good for you

There are many writers out there who are scribbling away at stories that never see the light of day. So does that make them a writer?

A story is actually a two-fold thing. It needs to be written, of course, but it then needs to be read or heard to make it concrete. That means that there is actually a relationship between the writer and the reader. So in my mind, unless a story is shared, the writer of that story isn’t a true writer.

I know it’s a scary thing to share your writing but until you do you can’t improve your craft. This is why submitting your work to magazines, journals and writing competitions is very important to any writing career.

Have a think about your work. If you were to submit a piece for publication, wouldn’t you work harder on it to make it the best it can be? This means reworking and polishing it. That has to be good for your craft, doesn’t it? This makes you look at your work more professionally.

Then there’s the act of submitting it. This means that you own up to being a writer (or artist because this also applies to all art mediums) and you put yourself out into the world. This is hard for many who are either introverted or unsure about their ability. But you won’t know unless you put your work up for sharing. You will face rejection of course but that will help you improve even more. Rejection is a HUGE part of being an artist of any kind. Learn to grow a thick skin.

It’s a catch-22 really, this whole publishing caper. In order to get published you need to have a known name. Submitting your work to places like page seventeen, [untitled], Going Down Swinging, 21D, Sleepers Almanac, is a way for you to get your foot in the door. This is one of the ways to begin your writing career. Enter as many writing competitions, like our [untitled] short story competition, as you can. You may just be lucky enough to win (yes, there is a certain amount of luck involved in competitions) and get published.

That first time that you have your story published, with your name next to it is one of the highlights of any writing career, not to mention that it looks good on your CV and will go a long way to helping you get published a second time.

Blaise

Voice.

So what is ‘voice’ in writing?

Google it and you’ll find any number of definitions.

This is what Wikipedia has to say:

    The writer’s voice is the individual writing style of an author, a combination of idiotypical usage of syntax, diction, punctuation, character development, dialogue, etc., within a given body of text (or across several works).1

From Rachelle Gardner, Literary Agent:

    So what is it? To me, your writer’s voice is the expression of YOU on the page. It’s that simple—and that complicated. Your voice is all about honesty. It’s the unfettered, non-derivative, unique conglomeration of your thoughts, feelings, passions, dreams, beliefs, fears and attitudes, coming through in every word you write.

    Voice is all about your originality and having the courage to express it.2

From The Kill Zone:

    In a similar manner, when it comes to defining the writer’s voice, it can be the combination of the author’s attitude, personality and character; the writer’s style that conveys the story. It’s called the writer’s voice. Voice is the persona of the story as interpreted by the reader.3

It’s all correct. And there’s any number of variations on the definition.

Recently, I’ve had discussions with authors who’ve said to me their voice changes depending on what story their writing. I don’t buy that.

For me, (the definition of) voice can be diluted further.

When I’m reading a story, I hear the narration in my head. It’s not my actual voice I hear. Or my standard inner monologue of thoughts. It’s something distinctive to that author. That author might diversify in what they’re writing – go from satire to contemporary drama to historical romance to erotica to sci-fi – but their voice always shines through, a sine wave that is unique to them, just as bands and artists have distinctive sounds.

Turn on the radio, for example, and even if you don’t recognise the song, you can usually identify it either by the sound of the vocals and/or the music. Even when artists try something difficult – e.g. go from rock to something jazzier – the sound is still them at heart.

Think about the song ‘Bohemian Rhapsody’. Listen to the vocal range displayed there by Freddie Mercury and the other members of Queen. But it’s all still Queen, regardless how many highs and lows they hit, how often the song varies from ballad to melody to rock.

Voice is something that I really look for in a story.

Sometimes, when I’m reading, I feel like the author has tried to aggrandise their prose, as if (they feel) that will make them sound impressive. When I was young, I used to try something similar, consulting the Thesaurus for alternatives that might astound the reader and show them how smart I was. Others I read might try to be shocking, as if (they believe) their temerity will titillate and/or awe me. There are any number of ways writing can be untrue to its author.

This doesn’t mean that voice has to be simple. It just has to be you.

It can take a long time to discover your voice. I think it took me twenty years. Usually it comes through lots of writing, lots of experimentations, lots of trial and even more error.

But as you write, think about how you tell your story. Think about how you would tell it, if somebody asked you to speak it to them. Would you dress it up or just be straightforward, be true to yourself as a person?

One final way to think about it: if we both went to the bank and the bank was robbed, we would both relay the experience differently, because we’re unique and our minds, the way we interpret and process events, differs. Even if we tried telling this story a variety of different ways (e.g. humourously, dramatically, experimentally, satirically) or in different styles (e.g. chronologically, in flashback, disjointedly, backwards) our voice would still be the spine of our narrative.

Ultimately, voice is about being true to yourself, regardless of what we write.

LZ.


1. Writer’s Voice – Wikipedia. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Writer%27s_voice. Accessed 20 January 2013.
2. Rachelle Gardner – http://www.rachellegardner.com/2010/07/what-is-writers-voice/. Accessed 20 January 2013.
3. The Kill Zone – http://killzoneauthors.blogspot.com.au/2012/09/what-is-writers-voice.html#.UPtBCmd5eSo. Accessed 20 January 2013.

Stories everywhere

By simply living we are creating our own story. Much of it will be boring to recount when we come to the end of it but there will also be thoughts, feelings, things learned and interesting events that are worth leaving behind. So how can we work out what to tell and what to leave out?

I don’t know about you but I’m not really interested in what you had for breakfast or the fact that you are drinking a coffee at a local cafe as so many people might post on Facebook. But others might be. That’s the thing. It’s all subjective. That whole one man’s trash is another man’s treasure thing.

That means that you shouldn’t tell a story that you think other people will enjoy. You should tell a story that you enjoy because there’s bound to be another person who also likes it. The clue is to make the way you tell it interesting. The devil is in the details (apologies for cliche). So to be a good storyteller, you need to give it a good angle. You need to have your eyes open to the world and suck up every ounce of information. Just be observant. Go people watching. Go smell roses. Write down anything that spikes your interest. See shapes in the clouds.